A Traveller’s Guide to Loving and Leaving Montreal
Extracted from Scrivener backup: A Traveller’s Guide to Loving and Leaving Montreal.bak2018-09-09T20-36
Draft
Should I be proud I stuck it out until the end, or
- Arrival
Welcome. If you arrive off a long-haul flight with an upset girlfriend like me, don’t suggest taking the bus into town. We can with savings from my last gig abroad, and a job for Elena to stroll back into (at the company she part owned)
My best attempt at French sounded like an SS officer trying poorly to infiltrate a resistance cell.
Should I be proud I stuck it out until the end, or upset that I didn’t see the train coming at me?
Outline
Where’s it all heading.
The AirBNB angle should escalate like a Wolf of Wall Street scam. The penultimate scene should be like the chopper scene in Goodfellas. This will add from compelling action to the story.
The FAM ends up throwing parties - the more lavish the more successful they get, but don’t go past the realm of possibility.